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All Deviations


There comes a place in every young man's life—
A place where that man doubts value, hates it,
Finds out his only real heroes were spite and strife,
And discovers that his only real friend is the pit.
Disturbed, unnerved, yet still moving, he is aimless,
He doesn't know where to turn, what to love,
What to burn; he sees only the world's shameless,
Blatant death mongering, from the wolf to the dove.
He never knew what to do about this kind of blue,
But he still tries, even though he fails, to go back—
Back to a place that right was right, true was true,
Instead finding only bitterness and hatred in the black,
A deadly combination for a soul as fragile as he.
My question, young man, is this: live or die, what'll it be?
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Bleargh... school is ebil.
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*waterearthgoddess:iconwaterearthgoddess: Apr 9, 2008, 3:12:04 PM
quite and understatement (about school)

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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
~GypsyBlaze:iconGypsyBlaze: Apr 9, 2008, 10:56:02 PM
forget school...this particular work is such a profound statement on your view of the world (like most of your work), only more general (in my opinion). i'd have to say that i agree with you too, the way the worlds going and how we're supposed to live in it with a higher standard and all that (theres more than that, but i'm tired its 2am and my brains not functioning very well at the moment)

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Dark Angel is the fearless leader,
Ready to lead and defend.
The pain from her past does not dictate her future.
Thought it threatens to overwhelm her,
She always overcomes it to survive another day.