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I've had enough, of this thing called light,
This thing called day, the “better” way.
The way I see it, there's another—night,
That's just as good, that's what I say.
I've had enough of your stupid sun,
That useless thing that beats down on me.
I like it the same way that I like a gun,
Besides, the moon is an easier sight to see.
I've seen enough of these so called “joys,”
To have a taste, and I really don't like them.
The way I see it, I'm  just one of your “toys,”
So very easy to pick up, to drop, to condemn.
That's right, I've had enough of your so called, “good,”
I'll find my own way, just like I knew I should.
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Yeah well, I'm tired, hungry, fairly angry, and just plain old down right now. I really do need to get me a punching bag for my room--I get the feeling it'd probably need frequent replacement, though. I really do hate paradoxes, don't you? Haha, ooooooooooooooooooooofffffffffffffffffffff course you don't--and why? Because you're not me, and therefore you don't even see the same paradoxes that I do. It's a lot like how some people like pie, and some people like cake. When someone raises a complaint about the quality of pie around people who like cake, therefore the roadrunner. When the little boy then crosses the road, a rabid tasmanian devil jumps onto Samus's face, like a metroid, except with many more fangs and claws. Amen.
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*waterearthgoddess:iconwaterearthgoddess: Mar 22, 2008, 7:26:46 AM Mood: Content
Should I be worried? Are you sleeping now?



Regardless, I did like your poem. It always amazes me with how you can rhyme. I have to be inspired in order to rhyme.

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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
~Blak-image713:iconBlak-image713: Mar 22, 2008, 7:47:56 AM
THE SUN CAN DIE.

that's it.... I like the poem and punching bags... can it really fit in your room? And if it can... and you go through them like pies and some person I know... that's expensive. D:

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My life is incomplete knowing that you're not with me.
I'm challenged with confusion and pain...

What is wrong with me? What did I do to deserve this?

Nothing. Absolutely nothin.
~Blak-image713:iconBlak-image713: Mar 22, 2008, 7:48:47 AM
wait, wait... I take that back, the sun can't die no matter how much i'd like it to because it's what makes the moon shine so yeah, bad idea... it can go hang out with Japan. yeah...

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My life is incomplete knowing that you're not with me.
I'm challenged with confusion and pain...

What is wrong with me? What did I do to deserve this?

Nothing. Absolutely nothin.
~grey88:icongrey88: Mar 23, 2008, 11:19:05 PM
I see the world as one big math problem right now, and one which, using my current tools, I can't solve. Thus, so far as the current road goes, I'mmana say it's a no go. This does not make all previous decisions mistakes, it simply means that this road goes no further. So, given two options, turning back and finding a way around, I choose finding a way around. This does mean that I'll be making some changes, including my sleep cycle. That's about as good an explanation as I can give.

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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
~grey88:icongrey88: Mar 23, 2008, 11:20:09 PM
Haha, well, that's more a figurative line, but by the same token, I do love the moon. It's beautiful, you know? The sun hasn't ever held the same light for me.

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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
~grey88:icongrey88: Mar 23, 2008, 11:23:18 PM Mood: Artistic
So far as the punching bag, I've only ever "broken" three of them, and I didn't exactly realize that I'd broken them until after the fact. More often than not, I just get frustrated. As far as the poem goes, it's pretty much figurative the whole way through. 10 points if you figure out who the speaker is speaking to.

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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
*waterearthgoddess:iconwaterearthgoddess: Mar 24, 2008, 4:29:09 AM
I can accept that. I understand about finding a different path after the one that you thought would be good was blocked by a troll.

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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
~Blak-image713:iconBlak-image713: Mar 29, 2008, 8:21:07 PM
well, literally I agree with it. In Florida I somehow got this... I dunno nerve reaction to hot and cold temperatures. When it is hot, my skin feels like it's on fire and when I'm in cool weather it feels like it's raining on my skin. Yeah, no one knows, but it's not doing it as much as when I was down there. You have any ideas?

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My life is incomplete knowing that you're not with me.
I'm challenged with confusion and pain...

What is wrong with me? What did I do to deserve this?

Nothing. Absolutely nothin.
~grey88:icongrey88: Apr 7, 2008, 8:52:55 AM
none? Is there anything else to the condition that might help me figure out what's gong on?

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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.