If it's an emotion, it's one of a multitude of choices.
Like holding onto someone and watching the moon,
Like the feeling you get while drowning out the voices,
Like strangling him now, in your hands, can't be too soon.
If it's a sight, there are so many there's no way to see them all,
However, the first red you'll ever see is that on the ground,
With a shocked look on his face, his last breath a boarding call,
Like some kind of hellish, damned soul laced lost and found.
If it's a sound, then there are only a few, from sad to loud.
If it's sad, it's a dull red, like a violin that carves notes to bone.
If it's loud, then it's a piercing scream, nothing slightly proud,
Like someone who's found his hand has just turned to stone.
If red is a soul, then there is one, and only one, thing it can be,
And that's a soul's last blazing fight for life, the worst red to see.















Devious Comments
Though I only mention any of this because I really felt it from the dull red to the blazing fight. Very romantic indeed.
Like I'm going to be able to guess the symbolism.
I don't think it is about love, though.
I really like the last line of the poem.
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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
It's just, when I think of you, I don't think of, well, dating/writing poetry on dating. This is going to take some adjustment. I need to reread your poem.
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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
--
Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
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Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in the respect, it irrigates the deserts that our lives have already become.
~CS Lewis
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My life is incomplete knowing that you're not with me.
I'm challenged with confusion and pain...
What is wrong with me? What did I do to deserve this?
Nothing. Absolutely nothin.
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Do you know what happens when you get an airsoft gun, some isopropal alcohol, a lighter, and a few thousand cue tips? I'll give you a clue--I live on the third floor of a guy's dorm--there's not a single person on earth who will know what happened but me.
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